Wanted feedback on a paper
Hey!
I was looking to get support with reviewing this paper I wrote in 2020. Would appreciate any comments on structuring and on additional material I can reference:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1MxWPSO1Gx05emm5mvsoAOcxAp9PjPI4JXnmorjyBdVc/edit?usp=sharing
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Hi Ayush. Thanks for the well researched piece of work on such an important series of events and a crucial period in South Asian and Nepali History. I have provided structural feedback based on legibility, ease of reading, as well as coherence. Please reach out to me if you would like to discuss any of the feedback points.